4 comments on “THE STORM by Siobhan Gallagher

  1. Interesting story, it has a real sense of impending doom as it moves from the mundane – the neighbours bringing in the pot plants – to the tense foreboding of the empty world.

    Some beautiful images, in particular, the layers of cloud unfolding like a mechanical contraption.

    I’m a little concerned about the dogs. I hope they will be all right, but I doubt it. And that makes me sad.

  2. Loved the point of view. Very immediate. I, too am concerned for the poor doggies. Hope they’re okay…
    😦

  3. You know the 2nd person POV has been used well when you don’t even notice it, when you’re pulled into the story by the throat and it won’t let you go until the end. Mighty fine work here.

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